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Englander
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Joined: 04 Jun 2004
Location: Devon, England

PostPosted: Sat Apr 30, 2005 3:47 pm    Post subject: Focused4.wad Reply with quote

OK, this is a 1 on 1 level, its not the most detailed, I tried to make it more playable than looking sexy, anyway give us your reviews. Shocked Wink

http://members.home.nl/djthesp/Focused4.zip

Cheers Maniac Wink


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lockwolf
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Joined: 04 Nov 2004
Location: Nakremy's Pants Posts: More than you

PostPosted: Sat Apr 30, 2005 4:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

just to let you know



might want to fix it
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Da_maniaC
Now with new lemon fresh scent!


Joined: 03 Jan 2004
Location: Netherlands Posts: 1337

PostPosted: Sat Apr 30, 2005 4:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

File has a different host now. Wink
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Samiam
G-String Warrior


Joined: 01 Apr 2004
Location: England - http://www.limpgimps.co.uk/

PostPosted: Sat Apr 30, 2005 4:58 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Uploaded to http://raider.dnsalias.com:8001/doom/userwads/focused4.zip

I had to change the capital F and re-zip.
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excelblue
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Joined: 07 Sep 2004
Location: Orange County, CA

PostPosted: Sat Apr 30, 2005 5:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Its general flow is in a figure-eight and a dead-end. The gameplay and graphics are nice on the outside, but if you examine closely, there is a good number of mistakes in the way it's done. Many linedefs in the wad are tagged without an action, and a good number of unreachable linedefs are tagged. Also, one linedef that might have been meant to be impassible (had the texture of some bars) can be passed through. A few things had more linedefs than necessary and some attempts at graphics have been taken too far.

Overall, a great map with nice graphics, but built the wrong way.

Score <if I hadn't bothered with the wad editor>: 8/10 (nice graphics, solid gameplay)
Score <after I looked at it with the wad editor>: 6/10 (good on the outside, bad on the inside)
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Da_maniaC
Now with new lemon fresh scent!


Joined: 03 Jan 2004
Location: Netherlands Posts: 1337

PostPosted: Sat Apr 30, 2005 5:42 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Samiam wrote:
Uploaded to http://raider.dnsalias.com:8001/doom/userwads/focused4.zip

I had to change the capital F and re-zip.


Right... i totally forgot. sorry. Razz
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Englander
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Joined: 04 Jun 2004
Location: Devon, England

PostPosted: Sat Apr 30, 2005 5:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ahh yeah I forgot about that one, the one that leads to a fenced ledge, whoops lol. Laughing
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lockwolf
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Joined: 04 Nov 2004
Location: Nakremy's Pants Posts: More than you

PostPosted: Sun May 01, 2005 4:48 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yay! Another review by Lockwolf:

Gameplay: Liking it, very nice and circular. one thing im not liking is such an easily accesible BFG, and to top that, the door that you open to get to the BFG stays open making it easier to get to

Graphics: , the gate thingy texture is passible and you can get into an area that you probably shouldnt get into. also, the ability to jump off the top of the waterfall would be kind of fun too

Sound/Music: I like the new weapons sounds you added, gives an alternate feel (the plasma one is cool). the music i think you could change but it could fit.

Gameplay: 6/10
Graphics: 6/10
Music: 7/10
Overall: 6/10 Nice map, could see a great future if improved (Possibally a good tourney)
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Exl
I hate penis like vegetables.


Joined: 13 Feb 2004
Location: North of the fries, east of the wieners, west of the tea

PostPosted: Sat May 14, 2005 9:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Reviewed.

http://www.zdaemon.org/wadreview/?RecordID=109
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Samiam
G-String Warrior


Joined: 01 Apr 2004
Location: England - http://www.limpgimps.co.uk/

PostPosted: Sat May 14, 2005 10:18 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hosted on L@P custom S3rv3R no.2
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