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Cartell's 'cyberwar4way' ctf wad release!

 
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cartelli
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 7:36 pm    Post subject: Cartell's 'cyberwar4way' ctf wad release! Reply with quote

Ive finshed with my first 4way wad and would like it to be reviewed

download url:
http://s37.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=36DKQ7OWO90R00X2GWDPBWTHXO

server setup:

map01
Game Type:(4 Team) Capture The Flag'
DMFlags:283776
DMFlags2: normal
Player Limit 16
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[dp]Eclipse
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 7:51 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

cool, i'll look at it later though :\
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spacepirate
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 8:13 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Lol, it is kinda cool man... maybe a kinda boring with only use shawn the the ugly floor, but maybe with another textures and maybe more textures it will be fun. It is fun anyway I think. Good map Wink
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cartelli
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 8:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

well i know not much variation on the textures but im gonna do some more stuff with it make it more detailed but ill fix it in the next release

alsoo a way more detailed 4way in the works
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spacepirate
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 8:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

cartelli wrote:
well i know not much variation on the textures but im gonna do some more stuff with it make it more detailed but ill fix it in the next release

alsoo a way more detailed 4way in the works


No, don't put more details... maybe delete some details because that lags Confused maybe try to fix some gameplay problems... it maybe be crampen on some parts. But details are enough Razz
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 8:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

will do just lookin to please
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_KE9_NecroMage
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 17, 2005 2:23 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I will have to look at this later when I have the time.
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 17, 2005 5:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I need to play this first but it looks except for the ground which I agree that it should not all be that flat. Otherwise it looks good.
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 17, 2005 6:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

We'll have to have an LDF party in the server when this is rotated.
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Dark Linux
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 17, 2005 7:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Im thinking my wad had an influince on you making this map Very Happy , if so I'VE CREATED A MONSTERRRRR!!! , BTW:great map 8/10 Razz
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cartelli
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 17, 2005 11:18 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

if the above dl has run out heres another
download url:
http://s42.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2QK5WBEP83M6O2QH7ZTUBB7ULH
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 18, 2005 11:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hosted on the GSN #8 Rotation
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enVision
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 18, 2005 12:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The gameplay seems like it could be ok but there's a lot of improvements to be made.

- Sorry to be blunt, it's ugly. Using white as a dominant colour in all bases has bad news written all over it. I also dislike the 'tile' texture in the bases. The clash of atmospheres when you go outside is too much, though there's nothing wrong with the outside it's the inside that needs the work.

- Textured floors that you can fall through, it's confusing and it doesn't look too grande.

- The cave bit next to each flag is too short to do anything really and again there's the clash.

- This isn't too much of a big deal, but maybe place the switches into the walls, out of the way to improve gameflow. E.g. when exiting a base, the crusher switch looks out of place.


Other than that it's a good map, I'm sure you can improve on it.
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cartelli
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 12:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Quote:
- Sorry to be blunt, it's ugly. Using white as a dominant colour in all bases has bad news written all over it. I also dislike the 'tile' texture in the bases. The clash of atmospheres when you go outside is too much, though there's nothing wrong with the outside it's the inside that needs the work.

- Textured floors that you can fall through, it's confusing and it doesn't look too grande.

- The cave bit next to each flag is too short to do anything really and again there's the clash.

- This isn't too much of a big deal, but maybe place the switches into the walls, out of the way to improve gameflow. E.g. when exiting a base, the crusher switch looks out of place.




rat-arsed: the textured floor above the slope stairs has to be there unless i out a door on the top because of the transfer heights, it blurs the screen like a missing texture,but ill work on it
i agree on the white textures and yes i will fix it
the cave yeah i could just take it out but i might enlarge it to make more than one entrance and exit to the flag
and sure i can do the switches into the wall np
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 1:04 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

no one can get this wad from getwad so i would like it if someone could post it on an accessible site preferably raiders but ill settle for anything, id be much obliged
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joshsmith
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 1:22 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Cart I think you can manually upload it to one of the doomsites. www.doomworld.com I think? There's an FTP place there. Someone who knows more than me about this clarify it for him.
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Samiam
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PostPosted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 1:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

cartelli wrote:
no one can get this wad from getwad so i would like it if someone could post it on an accessible site preferably raiders but ill settle for anything, id be much obliged


It's already is on raiders site, and when we play tested it in GSN quite a few people joined, so GetWad was fine for them. Maybe there was a temporary problem when you tried.
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Exl
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 19, 2005 11:12 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Reviewed, had been waiting a while.

http://www.zdaemon.org/wadreview/?RecordID=182
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