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cartelli has entered the game!
Joined: 01 Jul 2005
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Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 7:36 pm Post subject: Cartell's 'cyberwar4way' ctf wad release! |
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Ive finshed with my first 4way wad and would like it to be reviewed
download url:
http://s37.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=36DKQ7OWO90R00X2GWDPBWTHXO
server setup:
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Game Type:(4 Team) Capture The Flag'
DMFlags:283776
DMFlags2: normal
Player Limit 16 |
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[dp]Eclipse Dominating!
Joined: 07 Feb 2005 Location: Newcastle, England
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Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 7:51 pm Post subject: |
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cool, i'll look at it later though :\ |
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spacepirate AssPants
Joined: 25 Jan 2005 Location: que pasa
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Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 8:13 pm Post subject: |
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Lol, it is kinda cool man... maybe a kinda boring with only use shawn the the ugly floor, but maybe with another textures and maybe more textures it will be fun. It is fun anyway I think. Good map |
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cartelli has entered the game!
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Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 8:19 pm Post subject: |
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well i know not much variation on the textures but im gonna do some more stuff with it make it more detailed but ill fix it in the next release
alsoo a way more detailed 4way in the works |
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spacepirate AssPants
Joined: 25 Jan 2005 Location: que pasa
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Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 8:21 pm Post subject: |
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cartelli wrote: | well i know not much variation on the textures but im gonna do some more stuff with it make it more detailed but ill fix it in the next release
alsoo a way more detailed 4way in the works |
No, don't put more details... maybe delete some details because that lags maybe try to fix some gameplay problems... it maybe be crampen on some parts. But details are enough |
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cartelli has entered the game!
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Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2005 8:26 pm Post subject: |
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will do just lookin to please |
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_KE9_NecroMage Dominating!
Joined: 05 Feb 2005 Location: NJ, USA
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Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2005 2:23 am Post subject: |
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I will have to look at this later when I have the time. |
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_KE9_NecroMage Dominating!
Joined: 05 Feb 2005 Location: NJ, USA
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Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2005 5:00 pm Post subject: |
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I need to play this first but it looks except for the ground which I agree that it should not all be that flat. Otherwise it looks good. |
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joshsmith God like!
Joined: 14 Jan 2005 Location: Africa
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Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2005 6:57 pm Post subject: |
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We'll have to have an LDF party in the server when this is rotated. |
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Dark Linux Unstoppable!
Joined: 15 Aug 2004 Location: Deep down in places YOU WONT TALK ABOUT!
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Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2005 7:14 pm Post subject: |
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Im thinking my wad had an influince on you making this map , if so I'VE CREATED A MONSTERRRRR!!! , BTW:great map 8/10 |
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cartelli has entered the game!
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Samiam G-String Warrior
Joined: 01 Apr 2004 Location: England - http://www.limpgimps.co.uk/
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Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2005 11:34 am Post subject: |
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Hosted on the GSN #8 Rotation |
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enVision A.K.A. Rat-Arsed
Joined: 13 Dec 2002 Location: Lagland
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Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2005 12:03 pm Post subject: |
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The gameplay seems like it could be ok but there's a lot of improvements to be made.
- Sorry to be blunt, it's ugly. Using white as a dominant colour in all bases has bad news written all over it. I also dislike the 'tile' texture in the bases. The clash of atmospheres when you go outside is too much, though there's nothing wrong with the outside it's the inside that needs the work.
- Textured floors that you can fall through, it's confusing and it doesn't look too grande.
- The cave bit next to each flag is too short to do anything really and again there's the clash.
- This isn't too much of a big deal, but maybe place the switches into the walls, out of the way to improve gameflow. E.g. when exiting a base, the crusher switch looks out of place.
Other than that it's a good map, I'm sure you can improve on it. |
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cartelli has entered the game!
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Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 12:47 am Post subject: |
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Quote: | - Sorry to be blunt, it's ugly. Using white as a dominant colour in all bases has bad news written all over it. I also dislike the 'tile' texture in the bases. The clash of atmospheres when you go outside is too much, though there's nothing wrong with the outside it's the inside that needs the work.
- Textured floors that you can fall through, it's confusing and it doesn't look too grande.
- The cave bit next to each flag is too short to do anything really and again there's the clash.
- This isn't too much of a big deal, but maybe place the switches into the walls, out of the way to improve gameflow. E.g. when exiting a base, the crusher switch looks out of place. |
rat-arsed: the textured floor above the slope stairs has to be there unless i out a door on the top because of the transfer heights, it blurs the screen like a missing texture,but ill work on it
i agree on the white textures and yes i will fix it
the cave yeah i could just take it out but i might enlarge it to make more than one entrance and exit to the flag
and sure i can do the switches into the wall np |
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cartelli has entered the game!
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Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 1:04 am Post subject: |
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no one can get this wad from getwad so i would like it if someone could post it on an accessible site preferably raiders but ill settle for anything, id be much obliged |
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joshsmith God like!
Joined: 14 Jan 2005 Location: Africa
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Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 1:22 am Post subject: |
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Cart I think you can manually upload it to one of the doomsites. www.doomworld.com I think? There's an FTP place there. Someone who knows more than me about this clarify it for him. |
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Samiam G-String Warrior
Joined: 01 Apr 2004 Location: England - http://www.limpgimps.co.uk/
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Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2005 1:16 pm Post subject: |
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cartelli wrote: | no one can get this wad from getwad so i would like it if someone could post it on an accessible site preferably raiders but ill settle for anything, id be much obliged |
It's already is on raiders site, and when we play tested it in GSN quite a few people joined, so GetWad was fine for them. Maybe there was a temporary problem when you tried. |
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Exl I hate penis like vegetables.
Joined: 13 Feb 2004 Location: North of the fries, east of the wieners, west of the tea
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